Saturday, May 1, 2010

FFS.

RE: major work report!‏
From:Young, Ann (ANN.YOUNG@det.nsw.edu.au)
Sent:Saturday, 1 May 2010 8:54:19 AM
To:Mr Genvin Thirteen (mr.genvin.thirteen@hotmail.com)
No attattchment Mr Genvin 13! Hard to look at that!
AY
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From: Mr Genvin Thirteen [mr.genvin.thirteen@hotmail.com]
Sent: Friday, 30 April 2010 5:13 PM
To: Young, Ann
Subject: major work report!

hello miss
i know i should've done much more than this by now
but could you please give me some feedback for what i've got?
the stuff highlighted in yellow means i know it's not up to scratch / not complete
so could you maybe take a look at my intention (which feels short), audience, and the effects of two critical texts?
thanks in advance
by the way, your fairy costume thing was kinda cool



.. I waited like two days for that.

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