belonging story, by me and dee

Once there was a guy and his named John and his girlfriend brock up him. he was so so sad and he cried. oh god! i want, to die, he says, to himself in his own room, I really want to a sense of belonging as a result of a sense of connection another person, I hate my life!! And his mum then said hey go to school now and he said fuck off mum your shit

He started to cry with his eyes and tears, and slumped to the floor, still sobbing, 'O GOD!' he screamed to the ceiling 'O GOD WHAT HAPPENED!' His mum screamed at him and she cried too, and they sat together crying in each others arms'.

And then he logged onto Habbo Hotel but it was too late. Too late for now, anyway.

Lucky, he woke up. 'Phew," he yelled emphatically "It wass all just a dream!"

He woke up and looked at his girlfriend who was sitting next to him. "I love you Olliver!"

She loved him, too. So they went down to the beach and had a threesome with Fifi. Good! he thought.

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