Wednesday, April 14, 2010
Tuesday, April 13, 2010
Criticaltique - GENBEINS SHORT STORY
Well, I've finished it.. and I quite like it.. though I'm not really one to critique since I really suck at English now for some reason. wtflol.
I'll write up something for the first paragraph:
Jane sounds like she is around her late 20s, rather lost in a new world, yet has her (current) priorities sorted. The fact that she ponders on her current case of self, tells us that she is indeed conscious of her problem/disability. It brings about depth to the character, in the way that, Jane is written to be just like one of us, with our own problems wishing to solve them among peers.
..... I dunno, I had something really good and pointful to make when I re-read...but thatshiz came out ^^" sorry.
I'll write up a proper review probs tonight.
IF I CAN BLOODY FINISH PHYSICS/MATHS LOLOLOL.
ENGLISH F@#%^ NEGLECT.
I'll write up something for the first paragraph:
Jane sounds like she is around her late 20s, rather lost in a new world, yet has her (current) priorities sorted. The fact that she ponders on her current case of self, tells us that she is indeed conscious of her problem/disability. It brings about depth to the character, in the way that, Jane is written to be just like one of us, with our own problems wishing to solve them among peers.
..... I dunno, I had something really good and pointful to make when I re-read...but thatshiz came out ^^" sorry.
I'll write up a proper review probs tonight.
IF I CAN BLOODY FINISH PHYSICS/MATHS LOLOLOL.
ENGLISH F@#%^ NEGLECT.
I had a basket for deep fried for breakfast =O
1 - STEPHENS DOING THIS ON TUMBLR and I'm only doing it coz he's doing it. I'm not gay either.
6 - I actually get pissed when I hear stories about everyone getting wasted but I try to tell myself that people should be able to do what they want (within reason).
12 - Whenever the sky looks really nice, I actually would have no problems sitting outside and just staring at it all day except I have shitty work to do
me too fwen =X
also this will sound massively sissy but its prob the only insightful thing that ill post on smeg in awhile:
30 - Sometimes when I'm not sleeping I try to write songs and they all turn out fucking shitty and generic and I get really frustrated
maybe its good to realise a key thing that you've said.
Generic.
Generic as in, mainstream? as in.. stuff that too many people have done? Things we write are actually heavily influenced by our inner desires and motives, rather than our virtual virtues that are usually taken at face value.
Since you always end up writing generic, does it not provide a sense of security, for that you're not the only one who comes up with the stuff? As in.. countless others before you would also feel the same way, wish to convey the same messages.
I could so far as to say "you're not alone" in that regard.. but thats too much sissy. so much, you can't even count... etc hahhaahah
I think I would also like to do the 100 facts/secrets.. but it pretty much goes against something fundamentally me.. and thats to never simply and openly allow the world to directly see who you are.. Maybe because I'm scared that once they see everything that I am.. I'll become boring, and it might reveal to everyone that I'm not so different, and that I'm not really special in any way.
BRUTALLY HONEST? RARGH RAGH ARGH.
....
1/100! WHEEEEEY !
6 - I actually get pissed when I hear stories about everyone getting wasted but I try to tell myself that people should be able to do what they want (within reason).
12 - Whenever the sky looks really nice, I actually would have no problems sitting outside and just staring at it all day except I have shitty work to do
me too fwen =X
also this will sound massively sissy but its prob the only insightful thing that ill post on smeg in awhile:
30 - Sometimes when I'm not sleeping I try to write songs and they all turn out fucking shitty and generic and I get really frustrated
maybe its good to realise a key thing that you've said.
Generic.
Generic as in, mainstream? as in.. stuff that too many people have done? Things we write are actually heavily influenced by our inner desires and motives, rather than our virtual virtues that are usually taken at face value.
Since you always end up writing generic, does it not provide a sense of security, for that you're not the only one who comes up with the stuff? As in.. countless others before you would also feel the same way, wish to convey the same messages.
I could so far as to say "you're not alone" in that regard.. but thats too much sissy. so much, you can't even count... etc hahhaahah
I think I would also like to do the 100 facts/secrets.. but it pretty much goes against something fundamentally me.. and thats to never simply and openly allow the world to directly see who you are.. Maybe because I'm scared that once they see everything that I am.. I'll become boring, and it might reveal to everyone that I'm not so different, and that I'm not really special in any way.
BRUTALLY HONEST? RARGH RAGH ARGH.
....
1/100! WHEEEEEY !
Monday, April 12, 2010
SURE, WHY NOT?
Stephen says:
*TIME TO DO 100 FACTS ABOUT ME
Genvin Out is genvin lol says:
*we play with the soap
*oh how fun
*me too
1 - STEPHENS DOING THIS ON TUMBLR and I'm only doing it coz he's doing it. I'm not gay either.
2 - I'm really, really into Pokemon. I haven't even played any of the new games, but I'm really into Pokemon Online so that should count. I'm trying to fill up with shitty facts as fast as I can.
3 - Sometimes, I actually half-seriously consider, "Am I actually retarded and are all my friends only friends to be nice?"
4 - I have the shittiest shittiest shittiest shit shit shit shit gay music taste in the world.
5 - I believe that I will get the lowest ATAR out of my friends and it is actually true.
6 - I actually get pissed when I hear stories about everyone getting wasted but I try to tell myself that people should be able to do what they want (within reason).
7 - I've been vegaytarian for about four weeks
8 - I actually don't really give a shit about turning eighteen because the only thing I'm really looking forward to is being able to go over eighteens gigs
9 - I'm still not ready.
10 - I am stupid sheep and just follow whatever my friends do
11 - I'm really immature compared to just about everyone else and am hard to talk to
12 - Whenever the sky looks really nice, I actually would have no problems sitting outside and just staring at it all day except I have shitty work to do
13 - I don't blog about very serious things because I am not insightful enough
14 - I very genuinely worry about how I'm going to make friends in uni.
15 - I do a lot of my writing for Extension 2 between midnight and three in the morning, because there are less distractions
16 - Sometimes I think I should just drop Extension 2 because Stephen writes superior short stories but only does Advanced
17 - It might be funny sometimes, but I am so inept at dealing with the most basic situations (calling up a shop and asking directions when we're only one street away, asking for free samples of ice cream, etc) that I actually fear for how the rest of my life is going to turn out
18 - I really wish I was good at art and sometimes I try to draw decent pictures but rip them out of my notebook out of frustration and give up
19 - While I am glad that I dropped to 2 unit math, I am very self conscious because everyone else still does 3-and-4 unit
20 - I am ridiculously scared of major change
21 - I would actually let just about anyone with a pair of scissors cut my hair right now because I don't even really care about it that much anymore. That's not true, I wouldn't settle for a mullet, but nearly anything else, yeah
22 - I don't eat enough and I lost a kilo after going veg
23 - No matter how stupid and shitty it sounds, I am actually pretty proud of my garage punk HSC music composition
24 - I don't have my Ls because truth to be told I don't even really give a shit about public transport and the problems that everyone else seems to have with it and one of the main driving factors behind getting my license would be so that I can drive people around
25 - I actually feel like I owe everyone for putting up with me in Year 7 and 8 and probably 9
26 - I am scared of lots of stuff and among these are ghosts
27 - I am actually forcing myself to slowly become more desensitised to mushrooms
28 - A while back I decided to stop having caffeine, even in the form of Coke or whatever
29 - The other day I stood in the pet food aisle for five extra minutes trying to figure out if the cat food I had bought added up to over $10, because that's all I had on me. When I went to the counter, it turns out it added up to $10.50
30 - Sometimes when I'm not sleeping I try to write songs and they all turn out fucking shitty and generic and I get really frustrated
31 - I've only recently realised that things won't just 'work themselves out in the end' and that I have to actually do something if I want things to go anywhere
32 - I used to try to smile and look actually good in photos but I have since given that up and try to pull really stupid faces so when I look shit it's on purpose
33 - Sometimes when I talk about the world now I feel like I am not in a legitimate position to discuss since I don't do sciences. I wonder how much that will impact my life in future
34 - I don't want to be a journalist and I actually have no idea where the fuck I'm headed
35 - I am ridiculously frightened of electricity and if you give me a shock pen I will inwardly be really upset and freaked out but I'll pretend I'm not and I also really FUCKING hate static shocks
36 - I will actually cry like a sissy on the last day of Year 12 because I will miss the routine of going to school and seeing everyone
37 - I would actually love to adorn my room with art created by everyone I talk to
38 - I very rarely feel happy with how I'm dressed
39 - I actually very much enjoy giving really detailed feedback for people's essays and creative writing
40 - I really understand what people are trying to tell me maybe half the time and I am horrible at picking up on things. 'Half the time' is a bit of an exaggeration, but it's true that I am really, really lost a lot of the time
41 - I actually really enjoy romcoms
42 - I actually really fucking despise celebrity gossip magazines
43 - I really, really wish I could sing
44 - I wish I was really great at photography but I don't want to put in the work required to be so
45 - I don't have a single decent pair of socks, which is half null because I don't really wear socks anymore anyway, but in colder weather like today I'm starting to realise that I rather need them
46 - I am really, really vain. Does this clash with what I said before about not really caring about my hair anymore? It probably does
47 - I couldn't really give a shit about drugs
48 - Despite the fact that I don't care for drugs and alcohol, a lot of the music I listen to is based around partying hard
49 - I got four out of ten for my first Extension 2 English assessment task.
50 - I am actually truly convinced that I will get a really, really horrible mark for my Modern History half yearlies. I'm not even saying this in a "How'd your exam go? Awwwww I did soooo bad" kind of way.
51 - I am genuinely scared that I will lose contact with my friends once uni comes by because I secretly fear that I will not do as well as everyone else no matter how hard I try. Not really a secret
52 - I sometimes genuinely wonder why anyone talks to me, and they probably do too
53 - whoops, who cares, stephen says he's gonna save it for tomorrow morning but i can't be fucked finishing this anyway because i was supposed to continue doing extension 2 work at midnight and its half past midnight right now and i wonder why i continue to neglect my ext 2 work when i did so horribly in my first task and im probably gonna write a really shit short story anyway like that one about the dumb fucking shoe
wow, hasn't this been frighteningly honest?
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